Just another day comments/critiques?
Just
Another Day above the dirt
dealing with sorrow, pain, and hurt
trying to be grateful and sober and free
waltzing through infinite variety
Each day is a challenge but soon we die
while we're living lets chase the sky
Flowers and stars may be real pretty
but and empty life makes them look gritty.
Grab hold of the day the old Roman said,
and I hope he did, he's a long time dead
but you and I still have moving parts
lets make each day a series of starts
All of this happy is going to my head
I think I'll just crawl back into bed.
Comments/razzies?